Sunday, 7 August 2011

where the relation is not bloody! :P

when the cold wild freezes mystep forward
and blood stops in it's way;
ungrateful becomes the lord
there's someone who makes my day!

when the rocks will cut hrough my leg
and make me bleed
there's someone who brings the cotton
and says 'abe yaar kitna dikhayega?'

noathing but just a log
can bear support on a stormy night
and let you feel you are stringer tahn the wind
there's someone to be my log!

as i feel soledead
and look into the mundane river
there's someone's reflection on it
taht just cheers me up

when the steps feel unstable
and feelings are not homeward
 then there's someone who'll say
"abey thodi to pili!"
and"aunty ji pata nehi baat hi nehi manta!"grrrrrrrr!

but what ever they are like pillars who stand beside us
yet never pressurise us
find joy in the worst of moments
and doesn't kill the pain but neutralises it
like eno in acidity(it also reduces pain only diff..)

in dense dark forest if i lose the way
i know when the water is sprinkled on my face
i'll have them all in front of me
my friends..........where it's not because of blood but bond.....illogical bond magical bond!


a tribute to all my wonderful friends!

5 comments:

  1. amazing....
    all i can say is u r surely made for sumthing else,writing is ur calling...
    take my advice,write a book or sumthing long,i'm sre sumday i would find a book by pritha ash at the crossword!!

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  2. Ah!don't be that sure.......there is more to it the young talents are far too good and me far too lazy to strive for a fortune here but once i have nothing to worry about it's a good thought thanks and mr. y don't u comment on some more?are they less deserving?;)

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  3. Really a gr8 one :)
    Friends are the most important parrt of life.even everytime if they not able to help u they will try to share ur pain.
    0101

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    1. ur nt alone and they trust u what else do we need to fight?thankyou for the appreciation.this piece is just a piece directly rom the heart with no adultration.......i just wrote whatever i thought-priyaani

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  4. ur nt alone and they trust u what else do we need to fight?thankyou for the appreciation.this piece is just a piece directly rom the heart with no adultration.......i just wrote whatever i thought-priyaani

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