Thursday, 12 July 2012

suddenly(6)-life's not bad in maths

......when deep in his weird thoughts.....his sixth sense sensing trouble but eyes owning none-------'CRINGTRING' the BELL RANG!....he hurriedly walked passed the hallway and looked through the glass hole.......in seconds his mind cleared of all weirdness, he was immediately relaxed and his lips gave way an instant smile.Estella was here.He opened the door hurriedly returning from the frenzy.She squeezed through the door almost immediately and banged it behind her.She looked tensed."LOCK IT LOCK IT",she said pointing to the night latch and bolt........then she ran into the house as if to find the darkest corners......saying "they're here........David they're here!oh GOD"..........
David felt a sudden shudder and then recovered.He locked every possible thing and followed into the same room as her.Finding her crippled in a corner like a child he embraced her....."calm down.....look here....."
Her wet eyes as innocent as ever looked into his not too soon, her lips still trembling and hands shaking.
"Look here nothings going to happen......i won't let any of us be hurt....but u need to tell me something so i can do something".....

A loud knock was heard on the door.She shrieked "they're here!the police......they will kill us!", once again returning to her fit.The door was being thrashed now.It would crash open anytime he thought.He swiftly got up and went to the next room.Estella hadn't noticed him go once she had she was crying even harder.He appeared at once......his hands caressing the silver sides of an elegant handgun or more popularly known as pistol.Her sacred eyes lay wide open as she stared at it and David looked just chilled out with it......as if it was a daily affair.He approached the surprised girl.....she had stopped weeping and the door had gone silent.David thought 'they' were trying in some other way and soon on being unsuccessful they'd be back banging the door.She stared at him and suddenly said "will u kill me?".David laughed out "u?hw could i........the gun would backfire!it's ethical u see.....and it'd pain less the other way".....then he sat down beside her "this is to kill anyone who tries to hurt u......and u will remain blameless.....i take charge of the murders!"....he looked at her.She gasped,"oh ofcourse not i'm not leaving u alone!i'm staying with you."
She was slowly gaining consciousness.She slid her hand over his "can i take it?".
"What?",he said
"The gun?"....
"oh!yes...sure" passing on the gun a little disappointed.
"how do you use it?"
"yeah!just be careful it's loaded.......just be strong while u hold it so the reaction doesn't get you and u've got to keep it from changing direction while firing......".....he got up and stood at it's nozzle...."here demonstrate it.....hold it straight".
Then suddenly the trigger fired and a bloody body lay on the ground still conscious.
The door was banged again.
"they should not get u.......be careful.....just......" as his words got unclear.
Moments later the room was being inspected.....the police, CIA ... every place was being photographed!
The CIA head shaking hands with a fine lady........her hair bristled against her shoulder,the sparkling eyes,the ankles having small little Indian jewellery tied neatly(they belonged to her mother) .
Some part of the conversation that Brustle Smith heard was
CIA head "You just wiped him out?"
lady "yes!specially the impression my fingers might have left at work!i'm a finger person"she winked as she
slyly hint the wiping of her fingerprints from the gun.
wait!u don't know who Brustle Smith is?Why my!........you just saw him so many times......the person who gave David that weird feeling.....y the odd snake charmer,the guitarist.... ;)
He called out to the lady "when are u coming......Magdin dear!do u still have the mind to marry me?.......the engagement's today then i suppose"
She smiled at him......as she turned if David would have been there he'd have called her near him as "Dear Estella".........
She gave that gentle fall for her smile as she took leave of their boss and joined Brustle Smith and glided away.The events remained unnoticed in this part pf the street......it was never discovered how this murder was done.But what could be found out was......David yet again an impostor of  'Octen Stevens'-the primary gang leader in north America.....the police believed his contacts stretched out to terrorist gangs and maybe Bin Laden but there was no virtual proof.Years back he had gone underground and had eventually emerged as a completely changed personality.......carried his job as an impostor throughout America,committed innumerable murders.......and looted banks with their gang name as threat.The last person seen with him was a lady CIA agent-Magdin Frances.Now let me tell you she's the most efficient CIA agent and has max no of successful cases.She had the genetic traits that always concealed her age.She was 20 and could look like anything between 15 to upwards.She had taken up schooling of course under special permission and joined the classes for a 6month when she formed the base for her parents and the right home.Then the drama began and the fly trapped.
The bright halls were painted white and  Brustle Smith's house was a mansion.The curtains laid down.The rings were exchanged and she heard a silent whisper "I'd be there next time.....wedding you.right?",the shadowy figure of David said.She waved him away from her mind........hoping what she heard would be true and she'd not be the CIA next time....... .





Sunday, 8 July 2012

apology

guys i'm really sorry suddenly was taking a good shoot and it's it's on the verge of unravelling.I'm down with fever and wl deliver the plot asap.sorry for the inconvenience.i only want to give it the best output.so i guess u'l wait won't u?........till then get acquainted with the chars. thoroughly so that u don't flip back.keep checking........till then i'll put down a poem



The wild eyes so red so cold.......so weary
those slumber heavy lids drifted to allow the sun;
for it was cursed in the body it sought
refuge was taxable;

The hands clasped the bedspread
in pain of the visiting virus;
the feet they felt retarded
and refused to move a shore;

The feeble hands striving to get up
forcing every bit;
not just because it is ill
but because it was given the licence to rest,
Yet the pee statement made it impossible;

Lush green grass in the lawn outside
beckoned my sole to play in it;
My weary self was tired of the
permitted rest.......it wanted a move
to make a change!

The horrid apple wouldn't keep
the doc away......
and he wouldn't let me be away!

apology apology
to the outside;
for i must rest to get back
to that cheerful me;



Wednesday, 20 June 2012

suddenly(5)-The world's abnormal.....


The mystery continues...........
                                       -priyaani
Heida was so pleasant to see that even her betrayed self was pleasure for David and he thought  to himself something was desperately wrong with him!....The night went by easily with Heida seated beside him.The terrible day beckoned the trial only sooner.And injustice smelt in the air.Rituals like assembling were practised.So simply did Heida get up to the order and take a stand there.No feelings escaped her eyes, though at night David had in the street light seen the drop make it's way as he tried to embrace her with his tied hands!Now a professional replaced her.His end was near and Heida was the only thing he could think of.Then suddenly
"Any last wish u treachery's son?"shouted the now assistant........getting the volts ready for the physical shock.
David looked most sympathetically  towards his new found brother.....addressed him and said
"pay me some in return i give u all but let this man who hasn't known of his identity live a moment........i do not plead but demand!"....there was a steady voice and Edison thought him to be the rightful brother
Edison looked at him so suddenly as if he were disturbed from his tormented world of money........wickedly smirked and running his hands over the brow "twas all decided.was it not?"....taking a short step towards him "or was the notice too short for a weakling that which u inherit from father too..."and he deliberately pinched Davids skin near the wound and it soon gave way!
Heida
David not shaken yet went on "another night with Heida.....after 8yrs i see her now i want some moments as memory for i have not the pleasure of family like u did........"
The man turned into a monster"and family u say where saving petrol was more important , where mother was no more and father was about all himself!......"he shrugged his shoulders and waved his arm to shoo away the depression and was back to normal.Turning to Heida he said"such girl if u meet now u should fall in love.....so i presume but for today i rent u her!"and he banged the door behind him leaving Heida no choice.
The words 'rent' pinched him hard......what had become of this girl and she said this is what she needed?
But then thoughts were deviating in the other way.Heida's weakness was like his weapon......the limited time he had to live it!This last chance would actually determine the life of any one David or Heida.
They remain in the same room like both of them had an argument and waited for the other to persuade.They remained isolated for some time until David coughed his lungs out.Heida came running to render her services.He carefully looked into her eyes to see guilt,repent or any sign of pity.It was all there he presumed.He desperately tried to rise his arms to embrace her once again. Heida's eyes were now sore........not as pretty as last night.She carefully placed her arms to pacify David  "calm down David!.....calm down"and more drops gave way.


"I've missed u so long!"....David looking into her eyes
Heida turned round "I couldn't believe u'd have wanted to stay the last time before death with me......the one who deserted u!........i hate myself"
"it was my fault......i couldn't give u all.....and forget it now u must have had reasons"David lied
......."Heida i want to hug u once let my hands....."he tried to gauge her faithfulness for the Edison tribe.He thought if she could let go of it in love why not now?his logic desperately arguing with itself making assumptions now and then.
Heida was very near him before he realised....she quickly looked around went to a small corner and detached something which David predicted to be the camera and bent over him to release his hands.She carefully caressed his shoulder wound and washed it with some water.
"now u can do as u wish......but remember ur folly will take my life!"she shuddered.
David bent forward to hug her with the right and slowly brought his left arm closer.......a sharp bed rod had escaped into his palm from the rust........
then all of a sudden a tap on the window by he looked up in horror but it was the morning girl(Estella he immediately beckoned).She used a cutter to make way in the glass.Minutes later the road saw a lone couple rushing the way up......and on the way he said"You?How?.....i mean"and a sharp "Later....."followed.On their way they saw a snake charmed and he played the tune so odd like it were meant to dance to!David found him weirdly recognisable but he couldn't place him exactly.


Hours later when it was time for David's execution the troop got ready to assemble.The sheet unusually wrapped David and Heida with her slender body screened the huge muscles- looked weird to Schuld.He methodically arranged for the volts and approached the bed.He ordered Heida to move away but she wouldn't obey.He tried to separate her but the body was so resistant......and his eyes fell on the bed.The palm felt wet and he looked at it.......Heida was bleeding she was stiff with rigor mortis and the bed was a bluff!He removed the sheet and shouted in despair.Edison was uncontrollable and he shot the dead girl again!!!!!


After miles of running Estella slowed down and took him by the shirt and pointing she said "here it is ur to stay...., my father's place ur secure and be careful though ur safe here!father's out of station.....i'll come everyday to see u and get u some food if i can"her remorse mind repeating itself to shut up to calm down every time when she saw David.She opened the door with keys she had smuggled from the house.In front lay a warm large room leading into 2 separate passages and a lavatory .The kitchen was a small one and David stared at it as if he had won a fortune.Meanwhile he didn't realise the girl had almost made a farewell.He desperately called out"mind staying for some coffee, i can't make it!"David lied again....
Estella when we 1st say her

The girl turned back "sure" and smiled back.....as if boys could be so helpless some times and that gave her some trivial joy.
As she prepared some coffee the conversation took to great heights.David was desperate to know how she was there for rescue at all times and why did she help him when she saw him murder.
"ur questions are escaping ur eyes"as she looked at David...his eyes to be precise
Estella replacing Heida unknowingly
she contd. "let me say then u can say again...."with a space she said"it's not obvious......i've tried to solve all this myself but it has no ans. , why somehow i can't just resist helping u, i just know ur innocent even when i see u as a murderer.....i've tried to get it but all in vein.....i'm stuck right there."she stopped to look at David to see him in disbelieve or convinced."I know this way must be avoided but today i was hell late and mother rang me some several times......i couldn't tell her that i was only busy here for father has planned surprise for her........i rushed through this way and as of those few days u happened to be on the way again.....and again in danger.I luckily have this glass cutter for i worked on some pieces recently to shape them brilliantly.........and i saved u because i simply as any other day felt nice about it that's it".....while she said she took him to the 1st passage rooms, one of which was remarkably decorated and some very fine class cut pieces found their way in.It so brilliantly reflected the morning light that it shone like disco lights and the edge of some so finely cut that light separated to  form rainbow.David gaped at the talent.......he was not just convinced but all in love with it.In some time she came with 2 cups of coffee and David loved his share.....he was amused at his 2nd lie.....he was sure to  always have coffee made from her.As she walked into her pink shoes David took her hand held it firmly and said"thankyou!my this life is yours......".he assured.She reluctantly drew away her hand and from a distance waved him back.A joyous crazy girl he thought.Next morning the newspaper was slipped in.When he tried to follow the guy he lost track but a sudden turn only made his conscience prick harder.He just couldn't understand why he felt he knew this guy..........

Tuesday, 19 June 2012

suddenly(4)-Us is round too!

His torn arm now better searched for some notes in his trouser......to his surprise there were just francs.He had almost forgotten as he escaped from the mess he had to exchange clothing with the hard hit  french who'd been the NGO rep.The NGO dealt with criminal health and had come down to have a look at US jails!What a pity.The man was being extra sensitive to the made up troubles of David.When David had made the first blow he saw the man had wet his pant.Terribly nervous eh thought........
read on further to find this

Undoubtedly he knew the accounts would be blocked but he found a local money exchange counter.Everything would match easily ........he showed the passport and his work easily accomplished !
"thank you,  Mr.Harris Molve" the small built man said.
The money was no less it was enough for him to feast 5 days on complete Madeira(auctioned at $160,000 per bottle).......but now was time to run and keep awake not dine and wine.If only it wasn't like this and Heida was here beside he'd surely choose the first option./sigh sigh....he quickly made a move.
The 'Hot Dog store' van had already come up and a long queue extended.He quickly got into it and gobbled his piece after a payment of $3.This van system was what he liked.......not permanent so least expectant of being questioned.Further more he'd taken quite a few thing but it was pretty cheap.Flavoured sauces and chess finger lets all were available.As he placed his other burger which was to be his lunch in a paper bag he noticed his face.Instantly he looked again.......no it was the reflection of his but a newspaper cutting of his. The police were on the run and he dare not read the shit up there.He stared sideways and all round no one seemed to have realised yet......he immediately rushed for exit from the crowd and cursed himself for the run.Just then a boy of 15 could be heard shouting loud "It's him on the paper!"But then he was gone behind the forbidden lanes.......into the darkness where the sun dared not enter.He felt his lung thrust hard on his chest bones and he tried to comfort them by placing his hand on his chest.His heart pounded like much more than what it may have if he saw Heida he thought.Being a common man he had only some muscles that could give way as his gym courses would be discontinued for how long was uncertain.As he passed the houses they either seemed deserted or lame slang could be all that could be heard.And then suddenly a gun shot which made him motionless.He peeped into the hole in the wall and saw a dead man on the ground shot in the chest.A sudden bang on his head and he was dead he thought.
Next when his eyes opened he found himself lay flat on a somewhat bed, his legs sticking out of it and he most faithfully tied to it.He tried moving and actually called upon havoc!All men came up and he could recognise someone
"what a pleasant surprise Mr.young blood"laughed the wicked man.
Crook his best could remember, the bluff newspaper man he thought.
"We weren't to meet again had u agreed that day"  holding his toe nail he began "now i said everyone agrees this way or that!"and pulled hard at it.
David lost a nail.........it ached terribly and he gave out a shrill shout with a drop on his cheek.
"much more u must take in-but not much u'll have 1 day and u decide a simple death or one by one"......a little smirk grew into a large one "though it's my favourite the second one" and he left the room.
The man who backed him had his jacket on......the one in the jail.......and it immediately struck him it was the NGO rep.He'd have no choice now either he could flee or die.He was accused of the Bruce Edison murder and he was living.What was happening?
Sometime later in the evening the rep. had come with some water and food.His jacket now a brand new one with a tag 'Schuld Burge'.David stared at it and the man soon blurted out without a warning.
"for the brilliant deed u did ......... just as we had expected i owe u this secret.......after now that u should die u must know the whole thing"he brilliant smile engulfing 31 normal teeth and a single gold one.He probably didn't brush daily for some bad breadth made way into the room.He continued "I am as u now know his assistant unofficially and am associated with the NGO that i declared but with certain link in the old friends of the jail we easily established my entry and u escaped to Ur faster end.We do not bargain for Ur life only.If u did not notice but as u must know the truth this man so well known is Ur half blood i.e. to say u share the same father!".....then he glanced to see David's reaction.
David had surrendered to the ropes he looked frozen.....and then suddenly as if it was just another story!
hushing up David he contd. "u'd say no but now  u   got no reason to disbelieve yet I'll show u this."He hovered round the corner to the right and then left to open a drawer and fetched an envelope.An old dated photograph and a piece of paper came up.He held the paper first and read
'this may state legally all i owe will be my only living son's namely Bruce Edison.Under any condition if my missing son is ever found namely 'Arthur David Spainp'(named after his mother) shall be found must be given half my valued possession after proof of his being my blood.......'he then looked up and said
"ur mother had told this to u?didn't she?"...David's expression still shocked he contd.
"whatever!our man just found this days back and he was shocked as his father's unprized possession has turned to much more today and u didn't work ur ass for it he did........if u live his property stands at a risk so u must die!".........he looked like a boss then approaching the edge "ur work was making things complicated and the moment the CIA would discover the scandal u'd be on rocks!......now no more so.The dead body is definitely not his as we can see but a reason of charge against u.Sir Bruce will now live another life the underground one where from he'll aid his son and Richard will send the richesse as and when required.He put too much at stake for a bloke like u i think.Nevertheless i respect his loyalty.How he'll spend great sums on u once tonight.But for comfort u'll get to live life once tonight then die in peace tomorrow...."he slowly passed out of the door slightly waving his hand to someone who eventually entered and shut the door behind.
In the darkness it was difficult to make out.When the figure came close by and the figure shone in the dim light her smile and voice immediately brought back such amazement and pain to David.

"Heida ?",he said disbelieving his eyes coming back from the 2nd shock of the day.
She wore a pretty white tang top coupled with a jersey to enhance her Italian tan.A yellow bow thrown low in the waist as of 60's.She still looked 16 he thought when she spoke
"Urban life change........Curles` Bam they say, no regrets i left u David Ur in a worse state"
David felt this pain intensely much more than the gun shot, than the toe nail hurt........much more than anything!
"You had left without notice Heida........i still thought u got lost that day"
"No, i left u a message ....... that day i decided to quit......gave up all moral,values and here i am able to afford all that i desire" she said with a smile.
Somehow David now realised it wasn't the contented smile he had seen the one which was simple and innocent when he would give her a bow of candies.
"u had to wait......money is not easy!"he looked away from Heida
"no time......small life......."then she sat on the bed beside him.....her skin still glowing wonderfully just the perfect tan "I'm here for u here u can forget our old acquaintance and ....."she grabbed the plate unusually fast
"and ...... have it all"
She initially forcefully thrust some food into his dry mouth and some water.With time it had become the need as David realised.He now only thought how Heida still felt about him.He had looked away from the morning girl because he thought of the innocent Heida......and things were different now.



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Monday, 18 June 2012

suddenly(3)-ready to serve

once i thought the plot was arranging into some puddle and i needed to bring the excitement out
                                   - priyaani





Taking short breadths he felt the cold winds biting into him.The excruciating pain was no longer bearable, just one more foot forward and he collapsed in the snow as he hit the old oak......
Some blood lay soaked in the snow below as his lame eyes blinked in the hard day light.The pain had extraordinarily reduced.He thrust his feet against the ground in fear of being caught easily for maintaining the same site for log hours.The fear in him was tiresome since his escape from the jail after serving 6months of punishment.He had been caught for a mere rise of voice but much had happened before he knew.The schema was well drawn.When he was arrested much was preplanned.....a false accuse  for murder of a man he didn't know.Unfortunately he was present in the strike for cause lead by him.The news clipping had caught 'BRUCE EDISON'  last talking to him and then inconspicuously disappeared!Nearby a dead body was found claimed by his wife as him.'RICHARD EDISON' who was to take over after his dad had cursed this man.
BRUCE EDISON was no ordinary man.He was the famous billionaire who claimed all his money had come from the great sales of 'Daily News'.The man was a great bluff as he had taken over his father.Where his father barely managed a living this man made hell lot of news from the gutter and yet was on the top.His paper declared ridiculously how the president was  working on the fairly good  economic times when the recession has paralysed every man in US.He had come up that day as far as his tired head could remember
"I'll give u coverage in return promise me my benefits", the man barked
"what benefits?"came the sulking answer 
The fair headed of fairly good height man fished his leather jacket and showed it
"this gem was a gift for printing on the paper 'HEATHER gold' news.I cover u, Ur needs met.Where's mine?"
"were i so rich I'd have made an hospital and not stand here for justice!"-he said rather sarcastically
Thumping the shoulders he said
"I know that young blood!Hold Ur breadth and I'll tell u what u can do.......U will  get me my treasure........simple just break into the Hollard office and pass me the tender rates.That's it and media should not be Ur worry any more", he laughed incoherently.
The news was covered and unfortunately the tender rates had leaked and the direct suspect was him.Maybe if he'd agreed for it the snow would be replaced by warm fire and carpet.
He suddenly realised he tried to move but couldn't.He desperately turned around to see thick nylon ropes tied him to the oak.Alas all this pain was useless.His hostile efforts had failed.He'd been caught.Why did he bother to run and stay under a snowy sky all night with a bullet in his right arm.
A warm arm softly fit on his broad shoulder, "feeling better?"a soft voice had called out.

It was too polite to be any sort of crime control be it the CIA,local police or any.As he couldn't move much he had to wait till the shadow grew shorter.A slender girl in a white fur coat and jeans stood before him.Her coat had some blood stain too and a brown mark which looked and smelt iodine.Before he could enquire she immediately said working on the ropes"thought u'd try to move  the very morning so as i had to go to get some bandage i thought it best to not to leave u at the faith's trust,silly enough though u'll say"she said once looking at him with a short smile.
Soon he was released.Relieved that she was of no worry to him he now said humbly "thanks for the first aid"looking at his shoulder and now realising y it never stung now and yet something struck his mind "how did u find me girl, oh sorry this is Lean Walksman",realising he'd just been saved!The conscious girl raised from her stone seat nearby approached him stared at him and then confirmed"oh no, ur Meryl Streep!"
Taken aback he leaped forward"huh?"
"yes Mr. don't fool around Ur all in the papers!my dad reads Ur name 100times a day.He's with the press though.Ur if my memory beacons correctly 'mr.Arthur Spainp' " in a stern voice........ "an odd title she added"  smiling to herself.
"very well should have known.u don't like my title?wow what's Ur's miss?"another try to get some idea about the figure before.
"I'm not Meryl Streep Mr."her face bearing a smirk and then " Estella Bears, u can call me Stem,my friends know me by this name more"she said laughing.
"whys that?"
"they say it's because a stem's very rigid and I'm worse but i say there must be a rotten joke with it!"
Arthur David Spainp his complete name smiled as he thought about the days back in high school how they called names.
The  girl  once again started "When i found u here u were all soaked in blood and i had to run to the medical store to get some aid for you.Wouldn't bother unless I'd recognise u from the papers.U were doing good job and father says u were innocent so i wasted some of my cars petrol to get u aid"and once again smiled (that heart thumping one).
He was more mesmerised and hated her father's opinions though they were in her favour.How he wished it were her own.All of a sudden he heard voices, the streets were getting busy may be and he must make a move.He soon bid farewell to his lovely saver and left against his heard pounding!
The girl followed every step unless he was out of sight.Suddenly she saw the guitar guy playing a low note far away.She made a head start, hating  to have seen him after such a wonderful acquaintance. 


Story continued here
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